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Re: A new dawn
« Reply #165 on: December 07, 2018, 06:55:00 AM »

Faris Ha'tak traveling
Pel'tak


Faris was aboard the ha'tak, which was heading with its load of well-trained soldiers, to the planet where his brother and Kel'dar had been taken prisoner by the Tau'ri. In his mind, the jaffa realized that probably, a bloodbath would be accomplished as soon as it reached the planet's orbit, but it did not matter, the important thing was to come and try a rescue with what that gesture meant. Khnum had indirectly declared war on the Tau'ri, although the act had not been official. Faris had stopped wearing the usual jaffa clothes, but now wore a suit similar to the one previously seen in one of Stargate's episodes SG1 (Out of Mind). Sitting on the lower pel'tak seat, First Prime was about the maps of the area where the capture had taken place, so that they could act quickly without having to use ha'tak weapons. The planet was full of reliefs and also the area in which the capture took place, was a particularly inaccessible area and difficult to access. but there were no dissuaders or interferences from what seemed to report the information obtained until then. The planet was a location once under the control, although very bland, of a few goa'uld minor, certainly had no technology except those of the cache that the emissary of Khnum, had traced in the previous months. For this he had been sent to his surface, to investigate and open that hiding place and know what was hidden inside it. Few Ram Guards had remained in the pel'tak of the ship, Faris watched the maps and the information in religious silence. He had to elaborate a strategy before his arrival in the orbit of the planet, he had to catch the tau'rì unprepared. The jaffa was particularly focused when a whistle distracted him from what he was doing. The sensors indicated that there were unidentified spacecraft in the vicinity, but that their numbers could imply that they belonged to the Lucian Alliance, or what was left of it. It could be a goa'uld in the grip of some battle, but could not make sure, the final destination planet, it was now close, it would not take much then, especially with the new improved engines. He wanted to use the flagship, his hyperdrive was much better, able to travel through the galaxy, but Khnum had granted him a simple ha'tak for that mission. But just granting a mother ship was something typical of Khnum. No other goa'uld would have dared so much, especially for the recovery of some undercover agent. Rather they would have abandoned to his fate, the unfortunate one on duty. Khnum had never done it.Only after consulting each report did First Prime relax a moment. He closed his eyes, but that pause lasted even less than he expected. The voice of the jaffa at the controls of the ship brought him back to reality.

"Commander Faris, we would be in the orbit of the planet in about 15 minutes, we will activate the shields as soon as we leave hyperspace and we are waiting to carry through the Asgard ray, the vital signs of Fai'san, Kel'dar and goa 'uld! " he completed the jaffa after turning to his commander.

"Very well, but as soon as you reach the orbit, turn the ship on the coordinates of the outpost, if necessary, we will bomb the area!" Faris replied, leaving his interlocutor to nod. Only then did the jaffa turn back to the ship's controls. The expression of Faris became even more tense.



(Faris's ship will arrive in the next post in the orbit of the planet)


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Re: A new dawn
« Reply #166 on: December 11, 2018, 11:52:27 AM »

Gabbanat el Gurud

Faris had been leaving for about a quarter of an hour, that Rashaken had not left the capital yet. He was not worried about Faris, but about the consequences that such a gesture could bring to the ecobycles and relations between Khnum and the Tau'rì. That gesture was a declaration of war and could not remain unpunished. Faris was probably looking for revenge, not just the recovery of his brother. But what no one knew was that Fai'san was seriously injured and was slowly going out. In the ship that had been entrusted to First Prime, a sarcophagus had been placed in every worst situation that could arise. Rashaken walked the long corridor past the initial statues and the side rooms closed by beautiful golden doors, coming out in the open air. His steps led him to a building he knew well. Once in the ring room, the First Prime headed for a panel and composed a series of internal coordinates of the planet. Only then he placed himself in the center of the ring and waited for it to come down from the roof of the structure. Within minutes he found himself inside an Egyptian goa'uld temple unlike any previously seen. The First Prime emerged from the temple, finding itself in the large square of that small town. Ram Guards patrolled the large square and guarded the entrance to a small stone pyramid. At the arrival of First Prime, the jaffas stood at attention, letting their superior pass, who quickly entered the stone pyramid. The architecture of the interior of the pyramid was very similar to the pyramid of the city of Akhmenu, although the size of the pyramid was 1/3 smaller. But unlike the pyramid of Khnum, this place had been decorated with beautiful wall paintings. Three queens officiated their gifts, offering food, naquadah and human beings to the image of Khnum greater than themselves. As it proceeded within the pyramid, the light became less and less. After a few minutes, First Prime found himself inside the great throne room. Three stalls were placed next to each other, no one occupied at that moment despite the Ram guards being present in quantity.

"I must confer with royal princesses on the order of Khnum himself!" exclaimed the jaffa stopping in the middle of the hall.

"At this moment all three divine adorers are in their sarcophagi, we are not given the opportunity to wake them up from their rest, on pain of death, if you can tell us the reason for this request, we will advise you as soon as possible!" replied one of the Ram Guard approaching Rashaken. The First Prime was furious.

"How dare you talk to your commander in this manner?" Rashaken reproached him, suddenly taking the jaffa in front of him. The latter did not expect such a heavy and sudden reaction. With violence, the First Prime turned him over and slammed him to the ground. the noise of the bones that broke, was chilling. Blood sprayed from the head of the jaffa to the ground. Only when the latter exhaled his last breath, Rashaken let go and stood up. The guards present were terrified.

"Then wake up the princesses, Lord Khnum want to see them immediately or I will be forced to take them by force in his presence!" the First Prime replied, looking at those who were terrified of what had just happened. A sound of footsteps diverted attention and dampened nervousness.

"Barbarian and murderer as always angel's face ... after all Khnum could not appreciate the most dangerous jaffa once in the service of my former mistress Nirrti!" said a female voice suddenly appearing. A noise and two other women appeared out of nowhere.

"Lady Merti, Menhet, and Menwi ... Lord Khnum wants to see you personally ... he is not satisfied with the administration of wadi Gabbanat el Gurud, the reports of thefts in the sacred eternal dwellings, are three times in your province .. The Supreme Khnum wants exhaustive explanations from all three, in case something happens to me or you refuse to appear before him, the reprisal is ready ... so I ask you to follow me immediately! " he completed First Prime, hoping his words had been clear and there could be no misunderstanding

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Re: A new dawn
« Reply #167 on: December 18, 2018, 02:49:40 AM »

Akhmenu  city
Khnum Throne  room


The three brides, the three princesses goa'uld had been summoned by Khnum in no uncertain terms. The three of them administered a province that was recovering after the solar storm that had destroyed all life chances a few years earlier. But from the alliance the underground river had been restored and life in that southern towns had returned, thanks to the fugitives from the Jedar and Haraga planets. Rashaken as head of the army, had come to get them and none of the three could have escaped the trial implacable of the System Lord. At least that they did not have good motivations and arguments, to avoid a possible condemnation by the sovereign of the planet. The three princesses dressed in Egyptian fashion, adorned with jewels, appeared at First Prime who was waiting for them at the conveyor ring in silence. The three women positioned themselves in the center of the ring while Rashaken was behind them, almost wanting to control them. In a few moments the group found itself in the temple of the ring, in the city of Akhmenu, thousands of kilometers away from Gabbanat el Gurud. Five Ram Guards positioned themselves around the three princesses, and escorted them to the pyramid. With decisive but delicate steps, Merti, Menhet, and Menwi entered the pyramid, arriving in the central throne room. Khnum was waiting, hieratic above the throne, partially visible as the transparent curtains hid him at least partly from the sight of those present. With a wave of his hand, Khnum ordered the three princesses to kneel before him. Only after all three of them knelt down, the goa'uld turned to them.

"I am very disappointed by your local administration, although it has given you the means to make your province flourish again, the desertification is still over 90% ... so I do not see the reason to keep you at my expense, especially given how little you make for my empire! " Khnum completed by making his eyes sparkle by watching the three women.

There was a moment of silence, then to speak first, it was Menwi. Princess Goa'uld wore garments partly adherent and partly broad, but still transparent, in order to show the perfect body of the host in which she lived, and to attempt a seduction. Anyone would have been impressed, but not Khnum.

"My lord .... the situation in gabbanat el Gurud was and remains serious, you have restored the water course, but the ground is irremediably sterile, the solar flare, has completely destroyed the ground making it more like sand than the same cultivable land, we managed to partially restore agriculture, but the aridity of the land is such that it will take decades if not centuries to bring it back to life! " concluded the princess trying to justify herself in the eyes of the System Lord. The latter did not waste time to reply in turn.

"I am aware of the damage suffered, I did not restore the water course at all, so that you could work with your knowledge of terraforming, as I was promised, so far you have not been able to to do nothing, so your knowledge and fame are undeserved! " finally completed almost annoyed by his own words.

"We ask more time in this sense, we can not get quick results with such a serious situation, even if we want, not even the Ancients could do better than we did in these years!" Princess Merti added, taking the floor.

"And how long you would need ... we do not have the eternity, however long, the life of a goa'uld, it is still always short compared to the geological eras, so I need to have results as soon as possible!" Khnum replied, looking into the eyes of all three princesses.

"We understand your concern, but if we force the fragile ecosystem, we will desertify the area forever and nothing can be done in the future, so we ask you to wait for our work!" he also concluded the third princess, hoping finally to have convinced the System Lord. The latter did not reply, just stared into her eyes for a few minutes before waving. Rashaken raised them up.

"Return to Gabbanat el Gurud, today you will have my clemency, do not make me repent of my choice!"

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Re: A new dawn
« Reply #168 on: January 09, 2019, 12:45:23 PM »

Akhmenu city
Goa'uld pyramid


"You will not have to repent, we are working, we are using you with what is available to us, so that you can restore the fertility of the whole planet!" finally he added the third of the three princesses Menhet. Khnum watched her for a moment before waving and sending them back to their province. Only when the three princesses came out of the pyramid escorted by Rashaken and other Ram Guards, Khnum could take off his ceremonial helmet. He loved to show himself that way even with the goa'uld, but not all of his brothers were so willing to talk to a goa'uld who showed his face.

"The solar flare has really caused too much damage, if it were not that this planet is so rich in Nezanat, essential for the construction of ha'tak, I would have already left!" He exclaimed taking a deep breath before getting up from the throne and abandon the ceremonial hall.

Outside, the three true princesses escorted to the ring of the conveyor ring where there were numerous Ram Guards waiting for them with their ceremonial helmets on their heads. The three princesses gathered over the golden symbol of Khnum on the floor and waited a moment. In fact, not immediately the rings were activated, so that Rashaken could talk to them.

"Lord Khnum saved your life on this occasion, but next time I am aware that you will not be so lucky, I advise you to increase the production and refining of Nezanat, in order to have something to offer as a counterpart ... otherwise the next time we meet, it will be the last you will be alive! " he completed the First Prime by activating the conveyor ring. None of the three princesses replied to those words, as all three knew that Rashaken was definitely right about it.

Only after the rings reappeared without the three women, Rashaken could decide where to go. the provinces of the planet were twelve, from each came as necessary for the survival of Akhmenu, the city of splendor and power.

"Coordinates for the province of Deir el Bersha!" ordered the jaffà to those present, after all it was also up to him to go and check the governors of each of the twelve provinces every week. Only after entering the coordinates, Rashaken placed himself on top of the golden symbol and waited. The rings descended one after the other, transporting it to the province indicated by the coordinates.

Deir el Bersha province
City of Henu


The town of Henu was not different from the other cities of the planet, although around it there was a green territory, intensely exploited for an intensive agriculture, which served to feed the entire population of the planet. The outpost was the administrative center and exploited for food creation. The first in which Khnum had restored the course of the rivers. But unlike Gabbanat el Gurud, the soil of Deir el Bersha suffered less damage from the solar storm, remaining only partially exposed to radiation that elsewhere had really destroyed and made every form of life impossible.

"Commander Rashaken, we did not expect, I suppose you want to talk to the governor of the region, we will take you immediately!" exclaimed the first of the four Ram Guards attending the platform of the conveyor ring. Rashaken nodded without answering aloud. the jaffa was conducted through a series of streets to the governor's palace. Two Egyptian-style statues stood on either side of the large stone door. First First passed a first courtyard entering a hypostyle hall until it came to a small stone throne room.

"Wait here, the governor will be immediately at your disposal!" added the jaffa leaving First Prime alone though in the company of other jaffas, including some Horus Guards and Serpent Guards.

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Re: A new dawn
« Reply #169 on: January 09, 2019, 07:56:48 PM »

 <Vocuum device>

 A ping registered on Khnum's vocuum then Allienna's image appeared.



  "My Fellow System Lords. I am afraid I bring news of which I wish was otherwise. Ba'al has escaped from Olympus. Some of his supporters in the guise of our own guards attacked the main palace, killing nearly all within brutally. Morrigan herself was critically wounded and I have her in my care. At this point I have no idea where he is, but the Tauri suspect he may be headed to their world."
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Re: A new dawn
« Reply #170 on: January 10, 2019, 01:51:06 AM »

Khenem planet
Goa'uld  pyramid


Rashaken had just returned from the province of Deir el Bersha, when the vocuum device was activated showing a recorded message of Alienna herself. Rashaken looked at him carefully twice before going to report to System Lord himself. At that time they had great problems, only yet another was added. Quickly he had sent a Ram Guard to the System Lord's rooms and was awaiting his arrival. Without particular emphasis, Khnum appeared with his Lo'taur.

"My lord ... a message from Lady Alienna of the utmost importance! "Exclaimed First Prime, waiting a moment before starting again, the recorded message.

On the smooth surface, the image of Alienna appeared, her face worried about the news she would have communicated.

"My Fellow System Lords. I am afraid I bring news of which I wish was otherwise. Ba'al has escaped from Olympus. Some of his supporters in the guise of our own guards attacked the main palace, killing nearly all within brutally. Morrigan herself was critically wounded and I have her in my care. At this point I have no idea where he is, but the Tauri suspect he may be headed to their world."Alienna completed by closing the video message. Khnum remained silent a few minutes before replying in turn.

"Hall of the throne, activate the viewer, I will speak immediately with Alienna from that hall!" Ordered the System Lord to his First Prime. Rashaken bent his head slightly.

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Re: A new dawn
« Reply #171 on: January 11, 2019, 04:27:43 AM »

Serabit  el  Khadim
Secret  base


Jandir had remained on the orders of Faris himself, at the underground base in the desert region called Serabit el Khadim. That name was not goa'uld, it was Arabic and was given to a locality of the Sinai peninsula, exploited for its turquoise mines especially during the goa'uld and then pharaonic period. Goa'uld Hathor had started the thriving mining business and had built a first temple dedicated to her, a residence of her when she had wanted to visit the mining site. Since then the small palace had grown and had become a templar complex of great importance. just that complex and those mines had inspired Khnum. The future System Lord had visited the mining activity as a supervisor and remained fascinated. With yes once taken possession of the planet Khenem, he had decided to use the same name. since that outpost and the entire province, it was known in this way. the naquadah mines were in the meantime exhausted, but those of Nezanat worked in a continuous cycle, allowing Khnum to get rich further. It had been several hours since Faris had left aboard his ha'tak to the planet where his brother had been captured, since nothing had happened. No threats were detected, only a few values ​​in the engines of two ha'taks had attracted attention, but immediately the repair teams had arrived inside the individual ha'taks. Now the jaffa awaited the relationship. In the control room of the underground base Jandir waited for the relationship in religious silence. Five men entered the hall, each of them had a rather unmistakable look.

"Commander Jandir, we have diagnosed all the ha'taks of the fleet in this base and we have very clear elements, there has been a sabotage attempt, the two ha'tak Hyperguide started to overload and if we did not have stopped the overload, they would explode bringing in the destruction not only themselves, but the whole base and an area of ​​2000 kilometers around the base itself! " he completed one of the technicians. About forty, hair partially graying and cut short, mustache, very determined look.

Jandir was silent for a moment before replying, then took a breath and turned to those present.

"The other ha'taks must be examined immediately, if there is any sabotage going on, then we must prevent the fleet from being destroyed, the loss of some ha'taks is justifiable compared to the devastation of the explosion of an overloaded hyperdrive!" he exclaimed before being stopped by the same technician with whom he had spoken before.

"We looked at all the remaining ha'taks and did not find any tampering, but I think it's a random malfunction, I think it's necessary to run a diagnostics of the entire fleet currently on this base, including the flagship!" the man added, looking inJandir's eyes.

"Start a diagnosis then, but when Commander Faris returns, the situation must be returned, I do not want him to take care of him, especially after the Tau'rì's capture of his brother!" he replied before dismissing those present. Only Jandir and a second jaffa were left in the room, of which the warrior had not noticed.

"Jandir ... this situation is typical of the Tok'ra bombings, probably one of the technicians is actually an infiltrated spy, a tok'ra and probably not the only one, but in this underground base there is only one surely, they remained too few and are limiting losses in action! " concluded ta'ran appearing from nowhere. his face was calm but firm. Aware of those who know the problem well.

"Most of the technicians of this base of operations are jaffas or specialized humans, but among them it is possible that there are goa'uld or better than tokras, we must act with caution, we would have no other opportunity to find out if there are spies infiltrated " concluded Ta'ran looking into the eyes of his companion Jandir while the scene shows us the great flagship, partially illuminated by the lights of the base and their own.

"I trust you, do what you have to do and then report immediately, if we catch this spy, we could have a new advantage!" replied Jandir.

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Re: A new dawn
« Reply #172 on: January 14, 2019, 11:10:41 AM »

Deir el Bersha, a few hours before


It did not take long before the governor of the province arrived in the presence of Rashaken. The latter in the meantime had carefully observed the jaffas present, all belonging to other sects, all coming from the Serpents Guards, from the Horus Guards and even two Jackal Guards.

"Lord Amonsesh, I see with pleasure that you have completely settled, you have resorted to the mixture of jaffa to control the province ... but do not want to waste time, I came on the order of Lord Khnum, to check if the quotas of production!" exclaimed the First Prime without wasting time in useless ceremonials. For his part the goa'uld sat down on the low throne making a gesture of his hand to his servant. The latter carried a goa'uld tablet together with a reading device. Quickly Rashaken took it in his hand and began to read before turning to the governor again.

"Everything seems to be in order, but I would like to see the monthly load peronalmente, take me to the loading tel'tak so that I can personally see what is written in this report!" the First Prime concluded, looking at Governor Goa'uld Amonsesh directly in the eye.

"No problem, my jaffà will immediately lead you to the loading area of ​​the goods, we have nothing to hide, the province of Deir el Bersha, has never given problems, we have always respected deliveries and quotas!" he completed the goa'uld.

"I am aware of this, but Lord Khnum has asked to see what is required anyway!" added Rashaken in turn, trying to explain his insistence on having to view the goods for the capital in any case.

"I understand, in any case there are no problems anyway, Lord Khnum has done a lot by saving me at the fall of the empire, such a request is certainly not a problem!" added the goa'uld waving. Rashaken was led to one of the buildings in the sunny desert town. Seven tel'taks were parked in the large square, constantly monitored. Rashaken went into each of them to view the odds, and was pleasantly surprised. Only when he left the last one, he went to the governor goa'uld visibly satisfied.

"I have to congratulate you, however, Amonsesh, our lord could not have made a better choice for the control of this province, I am sure that sooner or later you will regain control of your planet as a reward!" Rashaken added smiling and complimenting openly for the excellent work done.

"But you are doing night, will you be my welcome guest if you want to stay and leave tomorrow morning?" Amonsesh proposed, trying to convince him. Rashaken knew how that goa'uld reasoned. But he also knew that to deny a courtesy, he would misrepresent the goa'uld.

"In the capital they can do without me for one night, besides if Lord Khnum needs me, he knows where to contact me, so I think I will accept your proposal!" Rashaken replied, aware of his words.

"Excellent!" the goa'uld replied.

Half of the night, Deir el Bersha
Palace of Amonsesh


We see the First Prime sleeping when two jaffas and the Lo'taur of Amonsesh come into his room. Rashaken wakes up immediately, aware that for a day of absence, something must have happened.

"There are problems, you must return immediately to the town of Akhmenu, a message has come from System Lord Alienna, it seems to concern the custody of the renegade goa'uld Ba'al!" Lo'taur added, looking at the First Prime half naked.

"For one night I get away ... never a joy!" Rashaken exclaimed using sarcasm to temper the nervousness that could be felt in the hall. In less than half an hour, the First prime was back at the conveyor ring, headed to the town of Akhmenu. Waiting for him there were some Ram Guards.

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