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P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« on: October 08, 2018, 11:11:14 AM »

Mlevfor



Planet: Mlevfor (P2X-498)
Race: Human, Jaffà, Goa'uld
Technological Period: Very primitive  Age (Human),  Advanced  Age  (Goa'uld)
Earth interest: Goa'uld  Outpost
Under  controll  of: Khnum
Domain: Khnum
Galaxy : Milky Way

Arid planet the size of the planet Mars, in which there is little water although there are numerous green oases in which the entire flora and fauna of the planet is present. Numerous underground rivers emerge for some stretches generating luxuriant oases. A large part of the planet's population is concentrated in five large oases and comes from the planet Earth and in particular from northern Nubia. Chosen for its mineral resources including the large amount of naquadah, it was colonized by the Supreme System Lord Ra and upon its death it came under the control of Bastet, before being claimed by Khnum. There are very few artificial structures on the planet, including the Pyramid of the Gods, the sacchae of the stars and the altar of Ra. all these areas are forbidden to the primitive population, which still lives in the natural caves that surround the great oasis where the pyramid of the Gods is located.
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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #1 on: October 08, 2018, 05:28:44 PM »

5,000 years before

The oppressive heat and light flooded those desolate lands. A great oasis in the burning desert of that planet stood out on the horizon. Almost in the middle of it, a goa'uld pyramid stood out surrounded by a dense forest and cascades of impetuous underground rivers. The sun was beating hard on that day, Ra had completed the pyramid for only two months and the entire population of the planet had been eliminated to prevent the work from being charged to the work of those slaves instead of the Gods. So he had assured himself of the belief that the place had been created by his divine power. Only five jaffas remained on the planet to monitor the pyramid awaiting the arrival of the new slaves that the Supreme System Lord would send. But the days were passing. One after another and no one came through the stargate. At least until that day. A sandstorm was approaching fast from west to east and would hit the oasis as it had done dozens and hundreds of times in its history. The Horus guarding the pyramid carefully watched the threatening blood-red cloud approaching. The stocks of water had been accumulated inside the pyramid as well as foodstuffs. The large stone door closed when the two Horus Guards at the door decided to return to the temple. The pyramid was sealed. The storm hit the oasis in full and the thunder and the deafening noise of the wind echoed within the stone pyramid. The bare stone walls awaited the decorations that had never even been initiated. The jaffas waited three days and on the fourth day, and more precisely before dawn suddenly the conveyor ring located in the innermost room was activated.None of the jaffas had noticed what was happening. Five figures, followed by another ten in two tranches appeared from the conveyor rings, helmets on their heads to cover their features. but none of them wore the same helmet as their companions, almost all were different, there were Serpents Guards, Setesh Guards, Bull Guards and even Horse Guards. All went in great silence to the area where they resided the jaffa guarding the pyramid and positioned themselves to surround them. The guardians of the pyramid did not realize they were surrounded. in a few moments a hail of shots took them in full killing them quickly. The carnage lasted a few moments while the scene moves in the orbit of the planet. We see a goa'uld ship identical to that of the same Ra approaching further to the surface descending altitude. The immense vessel descends through clouds and dust.Until anchored on the same stone pyramid, the dust of the storm seems to cease sharply and shows us the immense mothership of Cheops class soaring. Five Deathly Gliders are launched while the surface of the ship is modified by opening. the scene returns to the inside of the pyramid where one of the Ram Guards detaches and heads towards the inside of the pyramid. The conveyor rings this time carry the jaffa probably inside the big ship above them. The scene moves inside the great hall of the throne where there are a dozen of jaffà whose symbols are the most diverse. The figure of a boy gives us his back, more toned and less muscular than the jaffas next to him.

"My lord ... the resistance has been eliminated completely as you ordered, there are no other enemy warriors, we have not damaged their bodies more than necessary as you have requested!" he completed the jaffa by opening his Ram helmet and showing his face.

The goa'uld turns and we recognize Khnum. The look is what we are used to, but the goa'uld seems colder and more calculating.

"Very well their bodies will be resurrected and will join the militias already faithful to me, when Ra will realize that I have taken the planet, will send other jaffas and probably one of his ships, we must prepare to maintain the position, however I will start as soon as possible to send new slave population to start colonization and who knows that this planet does not really hide all that naquadah that the fone with Ra, have declared exist! "he completed the goa'uld by making his eyes sparkle as the scene moves out of the ship.

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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #2 on: October 09, 2018, 05:39:51 AM »

From  planet  Safenkel

The flagship was in the orbit of the planet Mlevfor, one of the oldest planet conquered by the System Lord. together with his flagship, also his escort of fifteen ha'taks that always surrounded her, even though it was not necessary at all to use half of the entire fleet for journeys across the boundaries of interstellar domination. After settling on the question of the planet Safenkel, Khnum had decided to go directly into the orbit of that planet that had seen him emerge millennia before the Supreme System himself, Lord Ra. Mlevfor had been his first real stronghold, even before Khenem, who at that moment was still under the direct control of Ra or better than one of his subordinates. The struggle that had been fought in the orbit of the planet and later on the surface, had been bloody, but had put a staple in the history goa'uld. Mlevfor had remained unaltered over millennia, deserted with small oases scattered all over the planet, covered almost in its entirety by sandy deserts and mountain ranges, like most of the planets chosen first by Ra and then captured by the forces of the various goa'uld including those of Khnum. Sitting on his raised throne at the back of the hall, Khnum watched with his great armor, the planet before him smiling slightly.

"My lord ... we are in orbit for the outpost, we will position ourselves above the coordinates of the pyramid of Ra in a few minutes, I prepare the teams for the landing!" Rashaken exclaimed, turning to the System Lord.

"We have no more news of Lord Mandulis for ten years now, it is presumed to have been killed and the planet abandoned by its jaffas, run a scan in search of symbionts on the planet, if there are survivors or otherwise, we must know before landing troops and drop them into some ambush! " he completed the System Lord by making his eyes sparkle.

"How do you order my lord!" Rashaken replied, placing his hands on the pel'tak controls to activate the most sensitive sensors in search of potential symbionts on the surface. It did not take long to identify a dozen signals enclosed in the pyramid itself.

"Twelve vital signs of symbionts, according to the sensors it is jaffàma we can not determine if it is a jaffa at the service of some goa'uld or shol'vah, we have to send explorers to know the situation!" he added, turning to the goa'uld behind him. Khnum remained in silence a few minutes before replying in turn.

"I agree, send a team to the surface of the planet, you will use the Asgard transport to avoid alarming traitorous jaffes!" Khnum replied, standing still on his throne, but making a wave of his hand.

"How do you order my lord!" Rashaken replied as he left the pel'tak, heading for the armory and the common area where a landing party was always ready for whatever mission was assigned to him. The jaffa went through several corridors and picked up the conveyor rings, setting them down to lower levels of the flagship ha'tak. The First Prime entered the hall where there were five jaffas waiting for him, no one wearing a helmet. At the sight of their superior, the jaffas stood in line and in silence.

"Jaffà ... you will be sent as a team in advance to know the extent of the signals in the pyramid of Ra and not only, if they are hostile, you are allowed to eliminate them all but if you can take prisoners, it will be even better, Lord Khnum has I intend to reconfirm his rule on this planet and we do not want to risk further losses! " he completed the First Prime looking at his men. Among these was the newcomer Jeshir.

"No question?" he asked again, but nobody said anything. The mission and the decision to operate quickly and in a targeted manner were evident, after all Rashaken did not usually risk more than necessary.

"I will go down with you personally to realize the situation and so that we can report our victory as soon as possible!" He completed while the others nodded.

"We will attack at night, with the darkness our helmets will allow us to move easily as if it were day and at the same time, to avoid being spotted by shol'vah?" he asked, however, breaking the silence of Jeshir.


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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #3 on: October 10, 2018, 05:42:20 AM »

The night on Mlevfor
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The asgard transport brought them near the pyramid without anyone being able to see them. One of the advantages of the fall of the empire was the arrival of new technologies after almost a thousand years of pure technological stagnation. Thanks to Anubis the shields, the armament and many other technologies were updated and made much more powerful and resistant. Only the old ha'taks had been destroyed during the battles fought in those years. Khnum himself had unsuccessfully tried to implement the updated technology in many ha'taks, but without success. For this he had built an impressive fleet, which was possible precisely because no goa'uld limited his constructive capacity. The tau'ri and their allies had been too busy in dividing the galaxy, to realize that Khnum had gradually recreated a vast empire to him vassal, a Neo Goa'uld Empire of which Mlevfor was but one of the many planets that would have part of it.Like Safenkel and other planets, Mlevfor would also be governed by the goa'uld, the Gods or parasites that certainly did not deserve what Khnum was doing for them. But the System Lord knew very well that it was indeed the hope for his species, now close to extinction. few were still the queens able to generate new offspring, and very few sovereigns able to protect them. The majority used the symbionts without restraint, sending to death those few jaffas who returned to serve the goa'uld for the most disparate reasons. Of this Khnum he was conscious while in his rooms not far from the pel'tak of the ship. His apartments were an entire level of ha'tak, placed above the same Pel'tak. In that place the 3/4 were his environments, the rest his servitude, where they lived, cooked and took care of every aspect of the same God. The goa'uld was waiting for information, he knew that Rashaken would come down with the team and that they would wait for the darkness to act and understand the strength of those on the planet. That is why Khnum was not worried, and he was enjoying a relaxing bath surrounded by his male and female servants on either side of the tub. An aroma of incense filled the bathroom while the eyes of the goa'uld were closed and the limbs softly laid in the water. A servant brought himself to the edge of the tub and waited with a large golden silk towel. Khnum opened his eyes and stood up, heading for the servant, allowing himself to dry gently before wearing a new golden robe. A collar was placed around the neck. Finally the goa'ud wore his golden Kara'kesh. His eyes shone for a moment before he saw the sarcophagus open before him.But before entering the sarcophagus, the goa'uld turned to his servants, asking them.

"If there were any problems or relationships, do not exist to reopen the sarcophagus, I do not want to discover unpleasant surprises once the regeneration cycle is complete!" he completed the goa'uld by entering the device's bed. Crossed his arms on his chest, the sarcophagus closed again while two Ram Guards entered his room to protect him. The servants came out of the room to take care of other matters for the care of his person. Inside the sarcophagus, the goa'uld once again thought about the day he conquered that planet. With him there was a minor goa'uld, a follower of Heru'ur but banned by the latter for having usurped his image and his cult in the terrestrial region called Nubia. The goa'uld in question carries a collar depicting a vulture, the one that looks like an armor underneath it, but in any case not that of a jaffa, almost a middle way. Serious sgaurdo, a light four-day beard and two big blue eyes.

"If there are no further problems, this planet will become your residence, you can serve me as custodian and governor of Mlevfor, providing me with the naquadah I need for my fleet, so that one day I can finally defeat Ra and his allies, until then Mandulis, you will remain on this planet guarding it and exploiting it at my request! " Khnum completed looking at the same Mandulis before him kneeling, aware that his only chance to live and avoid capture and a sure death, was that offered by Khnum himself.

"I am very grateful to you, I will do as you have ordered me, this planet will remain forgotten and hidden, and from it will come the naquadah you need!" Mandulis added, smiling at his superior.

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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #4 on: October 11, 2018, 02:54:37 AM »

On  the  planet

The darkness was now on the planet when the team descended to the surface of the planet without being seen. Asgard transport had avoided indiscreet and curious looks for their arrival. Rashaken was at the head of the group, helmet closed on his head, night mode perfect camouflage. The jaffas moved quickly but almost without making noise towards the pyramid of Ra that reached quickly and without anyone noticing what was coming towards them. in a few moments the Ram Guards found themselves in front of the entrance, strangely unsupervised in spite of two lamps in their big plates lit up. With a wave of his hand, rashaken asked for the use of the probe. It was Jeshir who offered his own. Rashaken rolled it with very little noise inside the structure and waited for the data coming from it.It did not take long before the data merged into the helmets of each of those present. Five vital signs, all jaffa, no real goa'uld, a sign that the planet was probably under the control of the Free Jaffa Nation or at best, a small bodyguard of some minor goa'uld, who had escaped the Holocaust decades earlier . Certainly it could not be Mandulis, the latter had been killed a few months before the fall of the goa'uld empire by the Orak warriors. The five signs were scattered, only one was near the entrance. Rashaken and his men entered after waiting for the right moment. a shot of zat's at close range stretched out the first jaffa that collapsed unconscious. Immediately afterwards the team fanned out in search of other enemies to be shot down. It was Jeshir who surprised the latter and spread it with a stroke of his zat's.The other three were not a big problem for the rest of the team, shot down with zat's shots and brought together with the first and tied. Only after making sure that they could neither escape nor do any more damage, Rashaken extracted his sphere of communication by placing it on his hand and waiting a moment. To appear there was not Khnum, engaged at that moment inside the sarcophagus, but one of the jaffas present on the pel'tak.

"The planet has been secured under our control, the enemy jaffas have all been captured alive and no interstellar warning has been issued, the prisoners transferred from the conveyor ring to the cells so that they can be interrogated in comfort!" completed the First Prime.

"I will inform Lord Khnum of your success immediately, wait a few minutes before spying the prisoners through the conveyor ring so that you can welcome them worthily!" he completed by replicating the jaffa on the viewer from the pel'tak.

Only after the video connection closed, Rashaken turned to his men.

"Let's take them to the pyramid's transport ring, they will take them into custody on the flagship, you will remain guarding the pyramid while I will go up with them so you can directly confer with Lord Khnum and perform their interrogation, if they have secrets or information, I'm sure I'll be able to get them even in the most abrupt way! " completed the First Prime. The group moved carrying the bound and unconscious prisoners inside the temple located at the center of the pyramid. The great hall of the ring showed the typical goa'uld architecture of the ha'taks, golden walls, statues at regular intervals, but each statue did not depict a Horus, but a Ram head like the one that served as a support for the conveyor ring of Ra's mother ship in the original movie. The First Prime stationed the prisoners together with his companions and waited a few minutes, then activated the ring controls and waited. Five rings descended from the ceiling in their bluish white light and in a few moments the prisoners disappeared sucked into the bundle of matter.

"If there are problems commanding we will notify you immediately!" exclaimed Jeshir, addressing himself directly to the First Prime. The latter looked him in the eyes before replying in turn.

"It seems to me also the minimum but I pretend that if there will be some hostile action, you will also eliminate that one and you will try to make prisoners, how many pium jaffà you will be able to capture, the better it will be for everyone!" the First Prime replied, disappearing immediately in the conveyor ring, wrapped in a very clear light. the frame returns to the jaffas present while the room returns to darkness barely illuminated by torches.

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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #5 on: October 15, 2018, 09:13:04 AM »

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Rashaken ascended through the transport ring, directly into the pel'tak level of the ship, but before entering the pel'tak, he was immediately warned that Khnum was not yet present. To the jaffa it did not matter, he would wait, or he would go to the higher levels to give news of the reconquest of Ra's pyramid to the same System Lord. Immediately the servant of the goa'uld disappeared through the corridors leading to the upper level while Rashaken waited in a side room, smaller, almost an antechamber. Large windows were open on the right side, a sign that he was on the right of the pel'tak itself. The walls partially covered with gilded panels interspersed with black slabs like the night, furrowed by curved golden lines that intersected at some points. Two rows of oil lamps on support stood along the sides while two statues representing Khnum in Egyptian style / goa'uld gave access to the ship's pel'tak.It took a few minutes for Rashaken to hear footsteps drawing his attention, then the door opened and Khnum's lo'taur waved him in. Rashaken took a few steps into the pel'tak room, long, semi-transparent curtains descending around the end of the hall where Khnum resided on the raised throne. Few Ram guards compared to what was usually present in the hall. Khnum wore his version of goa'uld armor, but he did not wear a ram-head helmet with corked horns. Rashaken entered the innermost part through the drapery and knelt before the System Lord before uttering a word.

"My lord ... the resistance on the planet was crushed, we avoided killing them and we took them prisoners to be able to condition them to make new guards to your order!" he completed the First Prime showing all his happiness for the accomplishment of his mission.

Khnum, on the other hand, made his eyes sparkle before he replied in turn.
 
"Very well, take the prisoners to the ship for conditioning, they will be an excellent addition to our army and since they know the planet so well, I will allocate them to the surface so as to continue the monitpraggio, but first I think it is necessary to know how many more information on who they serve and the military dimensions of our potential enemy! " concluded the System Lord looking in the eyes of his First Prime, knowing well that Rashaken would not let slip this situation so favorable to make himself more visible in the eyes not only of the same Khnum, but of the whole empire, as if it were a competition of beauty.

"As you order my lord, I will immediately transfer the prisoners on board for conditioning, in the meantime my men will remain on the surface of the planet to maintain their position!" the First Prime replied, bowing to the head before leaving the pel'tak of the ship.

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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #6 on: October 16, 2018, 03:35:14 PM »

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Interrogation  room


The five prisoners had been brought back on board the flagship, bound and still unconscious, brought into the interrogation room and chained to five supports that had the ability to rotate at varying speeds. they would have served as torture, after all Rashaken was the interrogator master and only rarely failed in his task. This is why Khnum had not only wanted him among his jaffas, but he had made a First Prime to replace faris, now relegated to the important site of Serabit el Khadim in the planet Khenem desert. The five prisoners slowly regained consciousness, looking at each other chained and seeing the presence in the Ram Guards hall with their characteristic helmets. Only after a few minutes Rashaken himself entered the room, the latter without the helmet.

"I see with pleasure that you have woken up, then we can start as soon as possible that I do not get the information without having to resort to torture!" exclaimed the jaffa smiling with that angel's face that actually hid the soul of a sadist torturer.

"Jaffa number one, your name and what I see Serpents Guards, still serve some God or you are one of those stupid shol'vah that obstinately oppose the Gods as the great Khnum?" Rashaken asked, approaching the first prisoner. No answer got First Prime from the jaffa who looked him straight in the eye before Rashaken smiled and took him to the second prisoner.

"So it will be the second prisoner to give me the information, he who is particularly powerful, or maybe the others, potrem, mo start to rotate the devices to see who will first give up and talk to save his life!" he concluded, moving away again while the System Lord suddenly entered the room. At his sight, Rashaken bowed his head and the Ram Guards bowed slightly from under his helmet. Khnum wore not only the suit seen previously, but also the pharaonic mask. The latter we see surmounted by a typically Egyptian crown called Atef.

"My lord ... we were starting the interrogation, you want to attend ... but I ask you to be a security reminder because the prisoners could dirty your sacred vestments!" exclaimed the jaffa but Khnum approached the prisoners.

"Free them ..." ordered the goa'uld by letting the first of the jaffas get off the torture device. But the mighty arms of two Ram Guards forced him to kneel. Only then the System Lord positioned himself before the prisoner and placed his kara'kesh before his face. The flow of energy descended from the device onto the head of the jaffa.

"Now you will reveal to me the secret plans after you have done so you will swear loyalty to my death, I am Khnum your God, you will serve me as you have always done until today, you are loyal to me!" said the goa'uld through his device to the prisoner's mind directly. Blood dropped from the nose of the jaffa on its knees, the look until then active and vital, became opaque. The conditioning was successful immediately without major problems. The prisoner got up bewildered but alive. A helmet ram was placed on his head. The work was replicated for three others with the same result, but the fifth strangely seemed to actively oppose the conditioning of the goa'uld leaving Khnum perplexed. stepped back, the System Lord, came out of the interrogation room followed by the new recruits. Rashaken remained with the last one the fifth jaffa that seemed to have managed to avoid conditioning.

"Apparently the persuasion of my God was not successful, it will mean that I can finally have fun a little bit ... so your name right away or I assure you that I will spit every single drop of blood and even every single organ , speak because in any case it will be suffering! " completed the jaffà caressing a wavy knife particularly decorated with decorations in silver and gold. But the prisoner did not even emit a syllable and it was then that the rotation restarted gradually increasing. But still no sign of failure by the prisoner despite the violence of the rotation began to stun him.

"Stop!" suddenly exclaimed the First Prime stopping the rotation, aware.

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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #7 on: October 17, 2018, 03:15:56 PM »

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When Rashaken had finished the interrogation, or rather the torture session, he left behind a torn body, bloodshed and almost unrecognizable. After all, First Prime was known for his terrible ability to torture without killing prisoners, a skill he had learned when he had initially observed a series of interrogations by the torture master of Heru'ur, the terrible and beautiful Hekort. Since then, under the aegis of Nirrti, he had perfected himself to a remarkable sadism. The door of the interrogation room opened up showing the spectacle of blood and death to the jaffas present, two Ram Guards and a Horus Guards who remained angry and incredulous from the brutality of the methods used by their commander. Without uttering words to them, Rashaken went immediately to the pel'tak of the ship that reached quickly. After kneeling before the System Lord, First Prime took the floor.

"My lord the interrogation of the last prisoner led to a final result, we came to know a project for the exploration and colonization of the galaxy called" Andromeda "by the Tau'ri and their allies, we also came to knowledge of the will of the Tok'ra, to abandon this galaxy in order to build their civilization in the aforementioned galaxy! " he completed the First Prime waiting for the Khnum to reply in turn. The goa'uld waited a moment before answering those words he had just heard.

"I imagined something of a kind, after all the tok'ra know they are close to extinction and they want to try even unorthodox ways away from prying eyes like those of the Tau'ri and splecially from our external interference!" he completed the System Lord by making his eyes sparkle.

"What my lord intends to do, soon the expedition to the galaxy Andromeda will complete the preparations and will leave and we could not stop it!" in turn he completed the worried Jaffa but the goa'uld seemed decidedly quieter than the jaffa when he replied to his words.

"If the tok'ra leave the galaxy it will be good, let's help them to leave in order to have a free field, with an ally less, the Tau'ri will have an abuse of potre that will get them drunk and this will lead them to their defeat and departure the final!" he finished, leaving Rashaken, who had been waiting until then, dismayed.

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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #8 on: October 22, 2018, 04:03:27 PM »

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"But now, however, we are awaiting news from one of our infiltrators on one of the planets that have attracted the attention of our enemies Tau'ri, probably their exploration of the sites of this planet are related to the mission of exploration of the new Andromeda galaxy , they will probably have found a way to reach it quickly instead of relying on Hyperdrive! " the System Lord exclaimed, carefully observing his First Prime, worrying about the news.

"I sent Fai'san and Kel'dar but I expect problems in this regard, especially with Fai'san, after all that jumbo energumeni does not shine by diplomacy and seen the God working on the planet, it would not surprise me to witness some problems of order and discipline! " he completed Rashaken in turn. At those words Khnum smiled delighted. After all, Fai'san's temperament was well known.

"The two jaffas will help the God as required, if necessary, or they will be ready to complete the mission and to prevent the finding from falling into the enemy's hand, no matter how, except for the final result!" concluded the System Lord ending up speaking and forcing his First Prime to conclude in turn.

"As you want my lord, you need to go down again on the planet and prepare a welcome for anyone who dares to reach the planet, we can not allow this world to remain free without a leadership that reigns unchallenged, I ask you to leave a fixed garrison and a goa 'uld of your confidence to control the planet, if it were possible it would be appropriate to take as a guest, the head of the population of the inhabited area, in this way we could keep the slaves submissive more easily!" He completed First Prime, but Khnum did not listen to him standing up and leaving the pel'tak room.

Mlevfor planet, goa'uld pyramid

Rashaken remained silent as Khnum emerged from the pel'tak, First Prime realized that he could act as he thought best, the important thing was the end result, it did not matter how much he could be reached. He bowed his head slightly, he too came out of the pel'tak room but from a different door and found himself in the anticamenra of before where there was nobody waiting for him. The absolute silence, broken only by the crackling of torches and braziers. The look of the jaffa was serious and tense. Quickly he moved to the area of ​​the conveyor ring and waited. Five rings descended and in a few moments the First Prime found himself in the pyramid. Before him two of his men with arms stretched out against him.

"Kree'ee jaffa, I'm Rashaken lower your weapons!" Rashaken ordered, showing himself in the face, opening the helmet at least partially.

"Sorry, commander, but the tension is so great especially since you are greeting in the ship of our God!" Jeshir exclaimed, bending his head covered by the Ram helmet by now ordinance among the jaffas in the service of the System Lord.

"Suspicious movements Jeshir?" asked the First Prime, advancing a few steps after coming down from some steps of the ring platform. The jaffa waited a moment before replying with some hesitation.

"We do not know the reason, but it seems that this pyramid is bewitched, we realized that the weather in these environments seems to slow down slightly, it's probably our feeling!" in turn he completed the jaffa almost with fear to report the feelings he had. Rashaken, for his part, looked at his subject in the eye before crossing it completely, heading towards the central hall.

"Jaffà kel'no tak!" the First Prime exclaimed, beating his ma'tok rod on the icy floor. Only then did the jaffas come close to the head and immediately after sneaking out of the pyramid, headed for the barely lit caverns around the forest.

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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #9 on: October 29, 2018, 01:40:29 PM »

Mlevfor planet

Darkness enveloped the surrounding area, but it would only take a few minutes to stun and bring the prisoners all out of the caves. Jeshir and the jaffas carried swiftly into secrecy, enveloped in the darkness at the entrance to each cavern and entered, calm of their night vision of their helmets. On the ground dozens of men women and children, asleep, unaware of what was going to happen to them. To take the chosen ones, the population would be stunned en masse, but at that moment it was not possible to stun them all together, so a stroke of zat's to each individual in sleep solved the problem. The discharges followed for tens of minutes and as individuals remained on the ground stunned, the five jaffas chose five easily transportable individuals. Five children who would have been the warning of the return of the Gods. After each jaffa took the prisoner, he headed back to the pyramid through the cliffs of the crags in spite of the darkness, slowly returning before the sun rose in the great oasis. Only when the sun entered the caves did the people of Mlevfor notice the lack of some of their members, five were the disappeared. They looked for them everywhere, understanding that they must have moved away or been abducted. They could not have been those warriors who controlled the pyramid of the Gods. But despite their doubt, they decided to go down and get closer to the pyramid itself. The noise of the leaves was clearly felt by the Ram Guards who observed the movements before them. All five jaffas wore a closed helmet, Rashaken was the sixth in the pyramid waiting for reinforcements to come. The prisoners were gagged and tied to a column.

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Rashaken waited in silence as the prisoners watched him in terror. they did not remember helmets like those, they did not know what would become of their life from that moment on. An activation light of the ring distanced the presents and we see another five Ram Guards appear, followed by five others for a total counting also those present in the pyramid, of 16 Ram Guards. One of the jaffes bends his head and we clearly see the figure of Rashaken nodding before taking to the prisoners.

"I transfer the prisoners aboard the mother ship, keep the pyramid under control and not be firing if anyone tries to get in without permission!" said the First Prime, placing himself with the five prisoners bound to each other and visibly terrified. The transport was immediate. Three more Ram Guards welcomed them, pointing their arms at the prisoners.

"Kre'ee jaffà, the prisoners are a gift to the God Khnum, take them to the communal hall and watch them!" Rashaken exclaimed without showing his face to those present.

"How do you order my commander!" replied the jaffà submitted taking charge of the five guys visibly terrorized. Quickly the prisoners began to whimper as they were led through the corridors to the hall, the fruit, water and other conveniences had been positioned to make their stay as temporary, enjoyable. Khnum wanted to reconquer the population not with fear, but offering a peaceful and familiar image. After the disappearance of Mandulis and his bad governance, he did not intend to repeat the errors of his previous choice. The five prisoners were speechless when they saw something they had never seen in their whole life. A few minutes passed before anyone entered the hall, and these were several Egyptian-dressed servants with large dresses, golden collars and jewels in their arms. With a wave of his hands, the head of the servants brought in additional attendants wearing suitable clothes and others to wash and make each of the five young people presentable. With a snap of the fingers, the transformations began as the scene moves out of the hall and precisely into the pel'tak of the flagship. We see Khnum with his head uncovered while in front of him is Rashaken, his First Prime.

"As you have ordered, I have brought you five young people from the planet, at this moment they are making them presentable, if they are not indiscreet, what will you do with them?" asked the System Lord for jaffa.

"They will serve me personally, one of them will become the new name of Mlevfor, it's very simple!" Khnum replied, smiling just before a servant put his helmet over his head and the Goa'uld sat on the throne before the curtains.


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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #10 on: October 30, 2018, 11:20:11 AM »

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"Apparently their best warriors are approaching thinking they are not seen through this thick jungle, sin only they believe to be invisible ... once in a shot, fire but do not hit them, I want to generate the most absolute fear and 'impotence, Lord Khnum will think to bend them with his recipe, we must only ensure the safety of these places!" he completed Rashaken now back on the planet with his men.

"How you want commander!" Jeshir replied, pointing his weapon at one of the primitive warriors approaching him. When the subject was close enough, the jaffa fired, brushing against the warrior, who, in response, threw his spear out of the jungle. Gesture that took aback Jeshir lying that moving sideways to prevent the weapon from piercing.

"Apparently they are going to kill, eliminate all of them, we will make Lord Khnum work as a merciful God and raise them to his liking!" the First Prime replied in turn.

"You commander!" exclaimed all the jaffas in unison aiming to kill inside the thick of that jungle. The first of the enemy warriors was hit in the chest, immediately falling to the ground, followed by Jeshir's target, and after theirs, all the remaining warriors were shot down. But immediately after the first wave, a second and then a third came, something that Rashaken had not foreseen.

"Apparently they are willing to attack this outpost to recover their offspring, let's exterminate them, I'll take care of making this massacre sweet!" added First Prime, making everyone present smile. With Faris they would have retreated to find a dialogue, but with Rashaken it never happened like that, the enemies were subdued or exterminated in any case.

At the fifth wave, none of the Ram Guards suddenly saw more attacks coming in and this could only do two things. Either there were no warriors capable of attacking them, or the creation of a trap or a bypass of the pyramid was in place so that they could be taken in some other way from behind.

"Commander, our viewers no longer indicate warriors coming in from any direction at least for now, but the range of the helmet is too limited, we should get closer to the forest to see better!" asked Jeshir in turn, addressing the commander. Rashaken, for his part, had realized that there was probably a pincer movement going on, so the only thing to do was to get inside the pyramid.

"All inside, we will fight them in our environment, with our rules, we will close the door the time necessary to place ourselves in strategic points!" he replied, watching his men nod in turn.

"How do you order commander!" Jeshir replied on behalf of those present before returning himself inside the pyramid followed by the dozen or so jaffas outside the building. Only when all the jaffas were inside, the stone door was dropped, isolating the pyramid from the rest of the planet. The dull noise of the boulder echoed between the walls of the initial hall and corridor leading to the great throne room. Quickly, the Jaffà placed themselves in strategic points so as to be able to see both inside and out of the loopholes and waited. Only Rashaken remained outside every post, he would have reopened the stone door before he got to the point where he would fight. Slowly he took her up and the First Prime carried a column behind him that completely hid him.

It did not take long before the first stealthy warriors made their appearance, after all they had to expect it, the jaffas they had captured, evidently they had trained them well, but what distracted Rashaken was that all the warriors carried the mark of Gods. But they had not detected them, a sign that none of them bore a symbiont, but took the drug created from the shredded bodies of the goa'uld symbionts. They knew how to move and would not give in easily. The first shot was fired immediately after an avalanche of shots echoed throughout the pyramid. Of the 16 Ram Guards, as many as ten died quickly, while almost no casualties among the rebel jaffas. Rashaken tried to circumvent one of the warriors, but found himself before another ready to hit him. Without thinking twice, the First Prime threw a knife that stuck into the throat of the enemy warrior.

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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #11 on: November 02, 2018, 08:50:11 AM »

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The knife stuck directly into the throat of the enemy warrior causing him to drown in his own blood, but Rashaken could not be said to be safe, his men were having the worst and could not understand how it was possible. Unless there was a mole among those who were still alive. Only five besides him Ram Guards were still alive and the only way to avoid capture or death was to get back on board the flagship or have further reinforcements. Quickly the First Prime took off from being the target of other enemies observing from where he stood, the advance of the enemy warriors. It was obvious that the choice to take back the planet Mlevfor, had been a deliberate choice to attract a trap and try to kill Khnum himself, decapitating one of the cornerstones of the new dynasty goa'uld line, the so-called fourth dynasty. Still the sound of gunfire and the thud of a body falling back to the ground, but this time it was not one of his men, but one of the enemy warriors who had been beheaded by the auction weapon of one of the last survivors. But that joy was short-lived, because what he saw soon after made him freeze the blood. From behind appeared Jeshir who struck a violent, sank the dagger in the neck of his companion. Other warriors appeared with the traitor and only then realized that everything had been well organized. Lord Khnum was in danger, even the prisoners were a potential danger despite the massive presence of jaffa for his protection. But he had to get to the ring hall to get back on board quickly and take Khnum away from that trap. Without waiting any longer, Rashaken came out of his hiding-place and although it was fast, two blows went towards him, hitting him in the back.But the pain of the wounds did not worry Rashaken who perfectly avoided the remaining impediments and went into the hall where the ring had been placed. Only then did he crush the crystal on the left bracelet, the blue crystal and the ring descended rapidly as Jeshir and the remaining rebellious jaffas entered the room. But the transport was faster and only when he was on board the flagship, First Prime understood the severity of his injuries better. Mortals, perhaps he would have reached the pel'tak of the ship and started the abandonment of the orbit, perhaps he would have done it, but he would have died anyway. his life was clouding, but he could not stop. Advancing rapidly, the First Prime arrived in the 'pel'tak of the ship and placed his hand on the console pushing the jaffa forcibly. Khnum jumped up and saw blood dripping from Rashaken's back and side. The great flagship immediately moved thousands of kilometers, abandoning the transport radius of the rings. Only then Rashaken died falling back to the ground in a pool of blood. In the meantime the ship had moved to the position closest to the star of the solar system, entering the chronosphere of the star.

"Activate the shields, deactivate the conveyor rings, maximum alert, out of the gliders of death and let's get ready to fire!" He ordered the System Lord making his eyes sparkle.

"How do you order Lord Khnum!" replied the jaffa returned to the commands of the ship.The atmosphere was charging with tension in the drama itself. Rashaken was lying dead on the ground but happy to have potentially removed the threat from Khnum himself.

"Shields raised, sensors out of line, we are isolated my lord!" he again replied the jaffà to the commands of the ship, seeing that nothing could be read because of the radiation of the star itself.

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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #12 on: November 06, 2018, 06:12:28 AM »

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It had been an hour since Rashaken had returned aboard the now dying flagship in an attempt to stop the attack on his lord. The flagship had temporarily moved into the chronosphere of the star of the solar system waiting to have resurrected the First Prime. Now the sarcophagus had completed its healing work and the First Prime had returned to new life. Rashaken's gaze was tesomentre dressed with a new armor intact and not particularly stained with blood. The jaffa was taken over by two other warriors who escorted him inside the pel'tak of the ship where the System Lord waited for him sitting on his throne in silence. His great armor seemed even brighter than usual. The serious, hard face. Only then did the goa'uld speak to his Prime.

"Rashaken that happened on the planet, you were treated for quite serious injuries, such as to require the use of the sarcophagus reserved for me, tell me then that it happened on the surface of Mlevfor to cause such wounds on your body!" asked the System Lord looking his best warrior in the eye. The First Prime did not wait long in the answer.

"The attack on Mlevfor was a trap, we were attracted with the claim of an easy victory and so it seemed, we captured jaffas that nevertheless acted as a bridgehead, we paved the way for an enemy we had inside and that could be partly still on this ship and not only .... "He completed the jaffa initially by taking a short break before resuming his speech.

"Among the ranks of the Ram Guards there are traitors, or rather jaffas infiltrated by the Free Jaffa Nation that expertly managed to infiltrate the ranks and hold office of trust, Jeshir who you have honored first is one of these vile shol'vah. ... he struck and killed his comrades to treachery and almost managed to kill me too ... but for his misfortune I managed to get back on board and take the flagship away and disguise it! " Rashaken completed, pausing. The pain on his side even though the wound was closed and completely healed, still bothered him. At these words Khnum looked grave.

"We will work to completely eliminate this threat, but we would do it safely, other jaffas will not come down, you will choose the men who will clean the entire surface from every existing human being, jaffa or slave .... repopulate the planet when not there will be no risk for my life! " Khnum replied in turn, making his eyes sparkle with his golden light.

"How do you want my lord, are you going to bomb the planet from the orbit or use other means?" Rashaken asked, knowing that Khnum had seldom made such drastic and draconian decisions. But his security came before anything else and would not have risked more than it should. He would play safely.

"Prepare a square of five gliders of death, they will descend on the planet and sterilize the surface with the use of the mutagenic agent found in the ruins of the planet Kyoto ... when there are no signs of life, then we will land new troops and we will colonize the planet again! " he completed the goa'uld as the scene moves on the surface of the planet and in particular within the pyramid goa'uld.

Mlevfor planet, goa'uld planet


Inside the pyramid we see the stargate activate while from it appear tens of reinforcements jaffà of every possible sect while the look of Jeshir is calm and posed on the open stargate itself. From it we see some jaffas come out seen in the classic series, but none of really important.

"Rashaken has managed to alert the System Lord of our presence and my coverage is skipped, we can no longer count on the element of surprise since Khnum will probably have electrified the prisoners after the return of Rashaken on board!" he completed Jeshir watching his battle mate nod in turn and reply.

"Lord Khnum does not have an escort at this time and we could attack him by eliminating him permanently, his disappearance would trigger a new collapse of the goa'uld or embryo empire, but do not worry Jeshir, our fleet is heading towards this planet to pose end to the reign of this goa'uld! " he finished smiling as Jeshir replied in turn.

"Very well, the reign of this false God will soon cease!"

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Re: P2X-498 : Mlevfor
« Reply #13 on: November 21, 2018, 04:09:40 PM »

Mlevfor System Solar

The flagship was firm in the crown of the star, which made it impossible to detect, but which also blinded the sensors of the flagship itself. Rashaken knew well that he had no escape, if the Free Jaffa Nation fleet had come by soon thereafter, only his entire fleet could have avoided a confrontation with a foregone conclusion. however powerful, his flagship would not last long against the hyper-concentrated fire of a hundred ha'taks simultaneously. For this reason, Rashaken recently decided to take the same mmiraglia out of the visual range, but moving away enough from the solar color of the star to contact his fleet to wait for him at the borders of the Corinthia solar system. on the viewer appeared the image of the same Queen Satis, until then seated on the throne of the planet Khenem as regent the absence of the legitimate sovereign.

"Queen Satis ... immediately send fifteen ha'taks to the position I am sending you, this is an order from our Lord Khnum, the ships must arrive within three hours ...." but the words were interrupted by the signal of arrival of danger. Rashaken's gaze became even more tense. A score of signals suddenly appeared out of nowhere.

"It does not matter Queen Satis, we are heading to immediately return to Khenem's orbit, activate the ushabti network for our arrival, we probably will not be the only ones to arrive, barrage fire for any unidentified ship follow us!" he completed the First Prime by closing the channel while Khnum himself entered the room, sitting on the throne raised behind the transparent curtains.

"My lord ... the sensors indicate the exit from the hyperspace of about twenty ha'taks directed to the surface of Mlevfor, we can not face all these ha'taks at once, we are about to return to the planet Khenem where the Ushabti's defensive system, will prevent any fleet dares to recklessly approach us! " Rashaken completed, but Khnum was not at all convinced of the strategy of his First Prime.

"This ship can quickly destroy every single ha'tak with just six direct hits, we have resistant shields so I do not see why not attempting an attack, if we destroy the jaffa fleet, it will be a very strong signal for the Free Jaffa Nation and its supporters. ..no abandon the crown slare, maximum power to arms and shields, we will destroy as many ha'tak before leaving this planet! " concluded the System Lord by making his eyes sparkle by sitting completely on the golden throne.

"How do you order my lord!" Rashaken replied worried about Khnum's decision. the flagship moved quickly away from the star's chronosphere and headed straight for the enemy fleet that had meanwhile settled around the planet. When the gigantic flagship was close enough, the ship's arms opened and the first target was detected. it was an old ha'tak once belonged to the late goa'uld Moloc. inside there were many of his former jaffas as well as some Serpent Guards at the controls of the ship itself. The Free Jaffa Nation fleet opened fire almost simultaneously as did the Khnum flagship. But the shield of the flagship was considerably higher than those of the s ten ha'tak. the first to explode after receiving seven hits, it was the ship that belonged to Moloc, followed by a second one that was interposed and was approaching. The scene moves inside one of the ha'taks and we see Jeshir in the ha'tak armament. The jaffa is visibly excited at the idea of ​​actively fighting the goa'uld, who hardly sees himself screaming inside the pel'tak. a cascade of sparks descend behind him as the shields of the ship of Khnum are constantly solicited by the hail of blows suffered. The scene moves once again on the flagship and we see Rashaken sweating profusely as well as the other jaffas in the various consoles.

"The shields have fallen to 81% and are still falling, we must reduce the damage or this battle will end before having destroyed this entire fleet!" Rashaken exclaimed, looking at the viewer, more and more worried.

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